What a nitemare to read. I stuck with it but wished after I didn’t. Reminds me of a 2.5 star movie that I watch to the end but am so annoyed as the credits roll.

Yes there is a dissonance, using LLMS just took their dot point notes and spread them thin. I personally would prefer just the notes and some personal anecdotes to tie the notes into a cohesive whole. This, this approach here, is not better.