Just my view: reading this is like being harangued by some irate ranter. The style will ensure minimal impact on those who should read it.

Small point: why the focus on the Roma as against non-Roma Romanians and Bulgarians who are also very poor but shut up, get down to work and obey the law. Anecdotally (I live in Romania) I would say that many Roma do just that. Plenty join the professions as doctors, lawyers, engineers and media folk or simply do an ordinary job of work but there is a criminal minority who are the authors of their own problems. However it's pointless trying to explain this to some of the right-on human rights brigade.